This is great Kathrin! Just some tiny corrections for ي، م ، ق when they are at the end:
For ق - try to make it rounder and not so flat like it's a ف. I like to imagine that this letter is a hippo swimming on its back with the dots as ears and the body underwater. unlike ف which is flat, ق is more rounded. So I suggest making your ق rounder (or fatter! ^^)
For م - the gap in your letter is quite large so for me, it seems unrecognisable. Try to close the gap. I was taught to right it so it looks like a close loop at the end. It shouldn't look like an open "hook".
For ي - you might want to practise this again. See how it look here: أعطيني - the start of ي when it is the last letter is joined to the letter before it. Try to imagine it's a roller coaster going up as it joins with the preceding letter then swooping about in the ي shape.
Hope this helps - and makes sense! :)
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