Shawn
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Pagi ini, Cumberland Farms kehabisan es teh Pagi ini, aku pergi ke Starbucks untuk membeli es teh, tapi mereka kehabisan, jadi aku membeli es kopi malah. Setelah berangkat dari Cumberland Farms, aku menuju ke Springfield, Massachusetts karena aku harus bekerja. Bagainmanapun, setelah bekerja, aku akan bertemu dengan Josh. Biasanya, kami menonton film bersama pada hari Kamis, tapi malam ini dia harus bekerja pada jam sepuluh malam. Kami mungkin menonton film besok. Aku sangat mau menonton film "Let's Be Cops". Itu nampak sangat lucu. Foto ini adalah foto Sheraton yang terletak di Springfield, Massachusetts **** American English for English Learners **** This morning, Cumberland Farms Was out of Iced Tea This morning, I went to Cumberland Farms to get an iced tea, but they were out of it, so I bought an iced coffee instead. After leaving Cumberland Farms, I headed to Springfield, Massachusetts because I had to work. Anyhow, after work, I am going to meet up with Josh. Usually, we would see a movie together on a Thursday, but tonight, he has to work at 10 PM. We might see a movie tomorrow though. I really want to see "Let's Be Cops." It looks really funny. This photo is a photo of the Sheraton in Springfield, Massachusetts
Aug 14, 2014 7:21 PM
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Pagi ini, Cumberland Farms kehabisan es teh

 

Pagi ini, aku pergi ke Starbucks untuk membeli es teh tetapi mereka kehabisan es teh nya habis. Jadi, aku memutuskan untuk membeli es kopi malah saja. Setelah berangkat meninggalkan dari Cumberland Farms, aku menuju ke Springfield, Massachusetts karena aku harus bekerja.

Bagainmanapun juga, setelah bekerja aku akan bertemu dengan Josh. Biasanya, kami menonton film bersama pada hari Kamis tetapi malam ini dia harus bekerja pada jam sepuluh malam. Kami mungkin Jadi, kemungkinan kami akan menonton film besok. Aku sangat mau/ingin menonton film "Let's Be Cops". Film itu sepertinya nampak sangat lucu.

 

^Very well written, keep it up :)

Foto ini adalah foto Sheraton yang terletak di Springfield, Massachusetts.

**** American English for English Learners ****

This morning, Cumberland Farms Was out of Iced Tea

This morning, I went to Cumberland Farms to get an iced tea, but they were out of it, so I bought an iced coffee instead. After leaving Cumberland Farms, I headed to Springfield, Massachusetts because I had to work.

Anyhow, after work, I am going to meet up with Josh. Usually, we would see a movie together on a Thursday, but tonight, he has to work at 10 PM. We might see a movie tomorrow though. I really want to see "Let's Be Cops." It looks really funny.

This photo is a photo of the Sheraton in Springfield, Massachusetts

August 15, 2014
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Pagi ini, Cumberland Farms kehabisan es teh

Pagi ini, aku pergi ke Starbucks untuk membeli es teh, tapi mereka kehabisan, jadi aku malah membeli es kopi. Setelah berangkat dari Cumberland Farms, aku menuju ke Springfield, Massachusetts karena aku harus bekerja.

Bagainmanapun juga, setelah bekerja, aku akan bertemu dengan Josh. Biasanya, kami menonton film bersama pada hari Kamis, tapi malam ini dia harus bekerja pada jam sepuluh malam. Mungkin kami akan menonton film besok. Aku sangat mau menonton film "Let's Be Cops". Itu nampak/terlihat sangat lucu.

 

Bahasa Indonesia kamu sudah bagus sekali :) Keep it up!!^^


Foto ini adalah foto Sheraton yang terletak di Springfield, Massachusetts

**** American English for English Learners ****

This morning, Cumberland Farms Was out of Iced Tea

This morning, I went to Cumberland Farms to get an iced tea, but they were out of it, so I bought an iced coffee instead. After leaving Cumberland Farms, I headed to Springfield, Massachusetts because I had to work.

Anyhow, after work, I am going to meet up with Josh. Usually, we would see a movie together on a Thursday, but tonight, he has to work at 10 PM. We might see a movie tomorrow though. I really want to see "Let's Be Cops." It looks really funny.

This photo is a photo of the Sheraton in Springfield, Massachusetts

August 15, 2014
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Pagi ini, Cumberland Farms kehabisan es teh

Pagi ini, aku pergi ke Starbucks untuk membeli es teh, tapi mereka kehabisan, jadi aku malah membeli es kopi. Setelah berangkat dari Cumberland Farms, aku menuju ke Springfield, Massachusetts karena aku harus bekerja.

Bagainmanapun Bagaimanapun setelah bekerja, aku akan bertemu dengan Josh. Biasanya, kami menonton film bersama pada hari Kamis, tapi malam ini dia harus bekerja pada jam sepuluh malam. Kami mungkin menonton film besok. Aku sangat mau/Aku sangat ingin menonton film "Let's Be Cops". Itu nampak sangat lucu.

Foto ini adalah foto Sheraton yang terletak di Springfield, Massachusetts

**** American English for English Learners ****

This morning, Cumberland Farms Was out of Iced Tea

This morning, I went to Cumberland Farms to get an iced tea, but they were out of it, so I bought an iced coffee instead. After leaving Cumberland Farms, I headed to Springfield, Massachusetts because I had to work.

Anyhow, after work, I am going to meet up with Josh. Usually, we would see a movie together on a Thursday, but tonight, he has to work at 10 PM. We might see a movie tomorrow though. I really want to see "Let's Be Cops." It looks really funny.

This photo is a photo of the Sheraton in Springfield, Massachusetts

 

Good job shawn.

August 14, 2014

Pagi ini, Cumberland Farms kehabisan es teh

Pagi ini, aku pergi ke Starbucks untuk membeli es teh, tapi mereka kehabisan, jadi aku malah membeli es kopi malah. Setelah berangkat dari meninggalkan Cumberland Farms, aku menuju ke Springfield, Massachusetts karena aku harus bekerja.

Bagaimanapun juga, setelah bekerja, aku akan bertemu dengan Josh. Biasanya, kami menonton film bersama pada hari Kamis, tapi malam ini dia harus bekerja pada jam sepuluh malam. Kami mungkin akan menonton film besok. Aku sangat mau ingin menonton film "Let's Be Cops". Itu nampak Sepertinya sangat lucu.

Foto ini adalah foto Sheraton yang terletak di Springfield, Massachusetts

**** American English for English Learners ****

This morning, Cumberland Farms Was out of Iced Tea

This morning, I went to Cumberland Farms to get an iced tea, but they were out of it, so I bought an iced coffee instead. After leaving Cumberland Farms, I headed to Springfield, Massachusetts because I had to work.

Anyhow, after work, I am going to meet up with Josh. Usually, we would see a movie together on a Thursday, but tonight, he has to work at 10 PM. We might see a movie tomorrow though. I really want to see "Let's Be Cops." It looks really funny.

This photo is a photo of the Sheraton in Springfield, Massachusetts

August 16, 2014
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