First Entry-Summer Trip

My first notebook entry is very short; I don't know how to write or say very much in Chinese as I have just started studying it. I had a friend look over it...any other corrections to make??

这个夏天，我去了新疆旅游。 我住在了喀什，我参观了三个博物馆，两个市场，（和）一些饭店。新疆的吃饭（食物）很好吃！

First Entry-Summer Trip

My first notebook entry is very short; I don't know how to write or say very much in Chinese as I have just started studying it. I had a friend look over it...any other corrections to make??

这个夏天，我去了新疆旅游。我住在了喀什，我参观了三个博物馆，两个市场和一些饭店。新疆的吃饭很好吃！

吃饭 is a verb, 饭or菜or饭菜 is a noun 

First Entry-Summer Trip

My first notebook entry is very short; I don't know how to write or say very much in Chinese as I have just started studying it. I had a friend look over it...any other corrections to make??

这个夏天， 我去了新疆旅游。 我住在了喀什，我 参观了三个博物馆， 两个市场， 一些饭店。新疆的吃饭很好吃！

     市场和饭店 在中国我们一般不说参观市场和饭店，你可以说，逛市场，去了一些饭店