Please correct these sentences Please correct below sentences. Thanks 1.My coworker represents his estimate about new project to devise for future. 2.Volunteers contribute to the group, whom ha

Pedram

Please correct these sentences Please correct below sentences. Thanks 1.My coworker represents his estimate about new project to devise for future. 2.Volunteers contribute to the group, whom has picked up garbage in environment. 3.They launched an organization that conserve from shelters children and donate necessary stuff to needy people. 4.After several time try, he could pass the exam. He was ambitious that wasn’t discouraged. 5.Efficient consumption can help to environment and don’t exclude vital sources from future generations.

Aug 19, 2014 4:49 PM

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Pedram, when you use English like "Please correct these sentences", it seems like you are giving an instruction. It would be more polite to say, "Could anyone correct these sentences?"

Please correct these sentences

Please correct below sentences.
Thanks

1.My coworker represents his estimate about for the new project to devise for future. [We need more information. What is the project?]

2.Volunteers contribute to the group, whom has picking up garbage in the environment. [In modern English, whom is going out of use.]

3.They launched an organization that conserve from to preserve shelters for children and donate necessary stuff essential supplies to needy people [needy people also means demanding people, so it would be better to say "people in need" - Use politically correct language].

4.After several time try attempts, he could passed the exam. He was His ambition that wasn’t discouraged.

5.Efficient consumption can help to the environment and doesn’t exclude vital resources from future generations.