Mahsa
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tourists and I I always like to see foreigner people but in Iran usually we see tourists lower.These days I do not out a lot because I am busy for learning English.But I reminded a few years ago when I were out of bookstore and I were watching books. My mind was to books and heard a strange vocabularies near me and without nothing saw her, I told her what do you say? (With Persian language) And then I saw them those were near me, they are there people. A man about 60 years old, a woman about 55 years old and a boy about 30 years old.They are blue eyes and European face. I told them with emotion, where are you from? They told me Netherlands. I told them " wow, your flowers are famous, you are welcome”. They were smiling but I did not know to tell them because my English were not well. So I told them bye and they told me we like Iranian people and said bye. Please correct my mistakes. Thank you so much.
Aug 20, 2014 3:52 AM
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tourists and I

I always like to see foreigner people,  but in Iran usually we see tourists are lower in number  these days.
 
I do not out go out a lot because I am busy  for    learning English.

But  was   I  reminded a few years ago when I   were out of   was at a   book store and I were

looking  
at books. My mind was to  on looking at  books and  but heard a strange vocabularies near

me and without nothing saw her, thinking    I   told her what do you    asked her what did you say?   (With Persian language)

And then I saw them those were near me, there were other people near me they are there people.

A man about 60 years old, a woman about 55 years old , and a boy  younger man about 30 years old.

They had   are   blue eyes and European face appearance ,  I asked   told   them with excited

emotion, where are you from? They told me the Netherlands. I said      told them " wow, your flowers are famous, you are welcome here ,  They were smiling , but I did not know how to tell them because my English was  were not very good ,  well.

So I said   told them        goodbye and told them    they told me we like Iranian  people from the

netherlands ,   and said



then waved my hand , bye 




Please correct my mistakes. Thank you so much.

August 20, 2014

tourists and I

I always like to see foreign people, but in Iran we dont see many tourists.These days I do not go out a lot because I am busy for learning English, but I reminded a few years ago when I was out at bookstore and I was looking at books. My mind was on the books and I heard a strange vocabulary near me. I saw her, and told her "What did you say?" (In Persian) And then I saw them near me. There was a man who was about 60 years old, a woman of about 55 and a younger man who was about 30 years old.They had blue eyes and European faces. I told them with emotion, "Where are you from?" They responded "The Netherlands". I told them "Wow, your flowers are famous, you are welcome here”. They were smiling but I did not know to tell them because my English was not very good. So I told them bye and they told me that they like Iranian people and said "bye".
Please correct my mistakes. Thank you so much.

August 20, 2014
Nice try. Keep writing and practicing.
August 20, 2014
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