José
AUTUMN Good morning! Autumn is maybe my favourite in the year. Every year, is the station I usually wait more impatient because Autumn means a special sitution for me. I´m a teacher, so, how school starts in Autumn, it´s a wonderful age. In addition, I like Autumn because Summer often is very tired. At the beginning, I go to beach everyday, but later I go every two or three days per week, so I end tired to beach and I need different things. In Autumn, the landscape is wonderful.: trees, streets, city in general is diferent. Not too much cold, not too much hot, It´s fantastic!
Aug 20, 2014 6:47 AM
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AUTUMN

Good morning! Autumn [may be] / [is perhaps] my favourite season / time of the year.

Every year, the season I wait for most impatiently is autumn.  It is special sitution for me because I´m a teacher and the new school year starts in autumn: it´s a wonderful time.

In addition, I like autumn because summer often gets very tiring. At the beginning, I go to the beach every day, but later on, I go only every two or three days per week.  In the end, I get tired of the beach and I need to do different things.

In autumn, the landscape is wonderful: the trees, the streets, and the city in general is different.

It's not too cold, it's not too much hot:  it´s fantastic / just right!

<em>Well done. I can't believe autumn is upon us either!</em>

<em>A few things: in N America, they say "fall" instead of "autumn".  I think autumn sounds nicer but perhaps its just because I'm English.  </em>

<em>Seasons do not have a capital.</em>

<em>Check the punctuation corrections.</em>

<em>"Maybe" = perhaps.  It's not quite the same as "may be" </em>

<em>Michael</em>

August 20, 2014
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