MY LIFE IN FILM I was born en Ciudad Real on 25th of september. I used to live in Pozuelo de Cva, a small village of Ciudad Real, but when I was nine years old, my family moved to C.Real. I went the

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MY LIFE IN FILM I was born en Ciudad Real on 25th of september. I used to live in Pozuelo de Cva, a small village of Ciudad Real, but when I was nine years old, my family moved to C.Real. I went the primary school in Pozuelo Cva. I used to play with my friends and cousins in my toy's room. Then in C.Real I studied secondary School and Institute. I remember specially my English teacher in secondary school. I like English language thans by him. Later I went to Institute for study to secretary, here I was good student because I liked it. I started work at the age of nineteen years in a officce. My parents were pastry, then we had a shop's pastry in C.Real. I worked like pastry for many years too. In 2000 (two thousand) year I went to work and life to Madrid, there I knew good friends and I enjoyed it a lot. In 2010 (two thousand and ten) year I made the most important decision of my life: I decided have a children with my boyfriend. Now my daugher is three years old and, of course, I'm proud of my decision. Now I'm working in a office and I'm living with my family in C.Real Actually I'm studying English and I hope improve it.

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MY LIFE IN FILM (creo que la titula seria mejor como: MY LIFE AS A FILM o simplemente THE STORY OF MY LIFE SO FAR)

I was born en Ciudad Real on 25th of sSeptember. I used to live in Pozuelo de Cva, a small village of in Ciudad Real, but when I was nine years old, my family moved to C.Real.
I went to the primary school in Pozuelo Cva. I used to play with my friends and cousins in my toy's (tecnicamente correcto pero 'toy' singular parece mas natural) room.

Then in C.Real I studied at a secondary Sschool and an Iinstitute (no use la mayascula a menos que el sujeto es un nombre propio, p. ej., 'The Institute of C.Real'). I remember especially my English teacher in secondary school. I like the English language thanks by to him.

Later I went to an institute for to study to be a secretary, here I was good student there because I liked it.

I started work at the age of nineteen years in a officce. in an office when I was nineteen.

My parents were pastry bakers, then and we had a shop's pastry shop in C.Real. I worked like pastry as a baker for many years too.

In 2000 (two thousand) year (no es necesario) I went to work and life to live in Madrid, there I knew good friends and I enjoyed it a lot.

In 2010 (two thousand and ten) year I made the most important decision of my life: I decided have a children with my boyfriend. Now my daugher is three years old and, of course, I'm proud of my decision.

Now I'm working in a office and I'm (no necesita que repetir el sujeto aqui) living with my family in C.Real.

Actually Currently, I'm studying English and I hope to improve it. (un error comun: 'actualmente' significa 'currently' en ingles; 'actually' en ingles significa 'en efecto/en realidad' en espanol)