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Convenience and Unconvenience Sometimes I choose unconvenience than convenience on purpose in my life. Because sometimes convenience takes freedom from me. Convenience is not so bad, but sometimes I am bound by working for money. (Please put on natural English) (I often use "sometimes", please teach me other way to say "sometimes"...)
Aug 20, 2014 9:21 AM
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Convenience and Inconvenience

Sometimes I choose inconvenience than convenience on purpose in my life.

Because sometimes convenience takes freedom from me. Convenience is not so bad, but sometimes I am bound by working  the  need to work for money.

(Please put on natural English)
(I often use "sometimes", please teach me other way to say "sometimes"...)here's a link to a Thesaurus http://thesaurus.com/browse/sometimes

These are the suggested substitutes:

consistently
constantly
frequently
occasionally

at intervals
at times
ever and again
every so often

from time to time
here and there
intermittently
now and again

now and then
off and on
on occasion

once in a blue moon
once in a while
periodically

 

I hope this helps!

 

August 20, 2014

Convenience and  U  Inconvenience

Sometimes  in my life  I  purposely  choose  u  inconvenience  rather  than convenience on purpose in my life.

 I do this   B  because sometimes convenience takes freedom  away  from me. Convenience is not so bad, but sometimes I am bound by working for money.

 

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Convenience and Inconvenience

Sometimes in my life I purposely choose inconvenience rather than convenience. I do this because sometimes convenience takes freedom away from me. Convenience is not so bad, but sometimes I am bound by working for money.

 

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Please do not worry about the number of corrections.  I made more corrections than necessary, because you asked for it to be made closer to natural English.

 

I have recommended joining the two paragraphs.  They work together to express a single idea, and should therefore be presented as a single paragraph.


(I often use "sometimes", please teach me other way to say "sometimes"...)

 

Sometimes I purposely choose inconvenience rather than convenience.

At times I purposely choose inconvenience rather than convenience.

There are times when I purposely choose inconvenience rather than convenience.

On occasion, I purposely choose inconvenience rather than convenience.

From time to time I purposely choose inconvenience rather than convenience.

 

I do this because sometimes convenience takes freedom away from me.

I do this because it seems that convenience takes freedom away from me.

I do this because convenience seems to take freedom away from me.

At times I feel that convenience takes freedom away from me.

Often I feel that convenience takes freedom away from me.

You may not even need a synonym for 'sometimes'. You make a stronger statement without it:

I feel that convenience takes freedom away from me.

 

Convenience is not so bad, but sometimes I am bound by working for money.

Convenience is not so bad, but there are times I am bound by working for money.

Convenience is not so bad, but at times I am bound by working for money.

Convenience is not so bad, but often I am bound by working for money.

Convenience is not so bad, but occasionally I am bound by working for money.

Convenience is not so bad, but on occasion I am bound by working for money.

Again, you may not need a synonym for 'sometimes'. You make a stronger statement without it:

Convenience is not so bad, but I feel constrained by working for money.

 

With fewer synonyms for 'sometimes':

Convenience and Inconvenience

On occasion I purposely choose inconvenience rather than convenience. I feel that convenience takes freedom away from me. Convenience is not so bad, but I feel constrained by working for money.

Do this composition feel "stronger"?

August 20, 2014

Convenience and Inconvenience

Sometimes I often choose inconvenience than over convenience on purpose in my life.

This is because sometimes convenience takes away my  freedom from me. Convenience is not so bad, but sometimes I am bound by working for money.

OR

I often have to put up with inconvenience/being inconvenienced, in order to make money.

(Please put on natural English)
(I often use "sometimes", please teach me other way to say "sometimes"...)

August 20, 2014
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