Wendy
The second month Although you have left us for two months.Feel like you have been alive.Every night in my dream. Did you okay in heaven ?Dear dad, I miss you so much!
Aug 21, 2014 10:06 AM
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The second month

Although you have left us for two months. ,   Feel   it feels  like you have been alive.  Every night in my dream.   I dream of you every night.   Did  Are  you okay in heaven ?  Dear  d  Dad, I miss you so much!

 

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The second month

Although you have left us for two months, it feels like you have been alive. I dream of you every night. Are you okay in heaven? Dear Dad, I miss you so much!

 

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I will admit that I edited this composition with tears streaming down my face. It feels so superficial to correct the grammar of such heart-felt writing.  But I guess that's why we're using italki.  

I am sorry for your loss.

August 21, 2014
Accept My Condolences :(
August 21, 2014
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