杨柳
Friendship is nice I like to meet different friends,everyone in the world is special,everyone has his own opinion to the world ,when we meet each other ,we can share what we have experienced,things we like or hate .Communication is fantistic!
Aug 21, 2014 2:18 PM
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Friendship is nice

I would like to meet different friends, everyone in the world is special, everyone has his, or her, own opinion to about the world ,. When we meet each other, we can share what we have experienced, things we like or hate. Communication is fantistic!

 

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August 21, 2014
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Friendship is Nice

I like to meet different friends, everyone in the world is special, everyone has his own opinion to about the world. ,When we meet each other, we can share what we have experienced, things we like or hate .Communication is fantastic!

August 21, 2014
Yep right.
August 21, 2014
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