Have you been in a critical situation ? Wouldn't you have thought if you or somebody had been in intensive care room ? I tell you I had been interned there because of I used t

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Have you been in a critical situation ? Wouldn't you have thought if you or somebody had been in intensive care room ? I tell you I had been interned there because of I used to have health problems.. I felt that vividly, and since then , my life was being changed a lot of. But currently I get used to live healthier thanks to I have changed. my habits of health.

Aug 21, 2014 9:47 PM

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Have you been in a critical situation ?

Wouldn't What would you have thought if you or somebody had been in an intensive care room ? I tell you I had been interned there because of I used to have health problems.. I felt that vividly, and, since then,, my life was being has changed a lot of. But c Currently I get used to live healthier thanks to I have having changed. my habits of health .

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In terms of grammar, it is okay to say "live healthier". However, a native English speaker would instead say "live a healthier life".

In terms of grammar, it is also okay to say "habits of health". However, a native English speaker would instead stay "lifestyle".

If we include these two changes, the following composition would be closer to native English:

What would you have thought if you or somebody had been in an intensive care room? I had been interned there because I used to have health problems. I felt that vividly and, since then, my life has changed a lot. Currently I live a healthier life thanks to having changed my lifestyle.

August 22, 2014

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