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Could you correct my writing, please? Thanks a lot in advance. Hello, How are you and your family doing? I hope you are doing great and this letter finds you happy and in good health. Sorry for not writing for so long but I have a good excuse- I hadn't been at home for more than a month. I and my daughter went to Sochi to the Black sea. The holiday was fabulous but ,unfortunately, so costly. I took a loan from the bank to pay for our resort house and for train and the plane. By installments I am going to repay my debt to the bank We went there by train. The train in which we travelled was new and was constructed specially to the Olimpic Games. It was brand new and very clean. We returned by plane. Today I wen to work- it was my first working day after my holiday. I cleaned two window and the floor from bubble chews. That's all for now. Please take good care. Lots of love, your friend Ada
Aug 22, 2014 9:25 AM
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Could you correct my writing, please? Thanks a lot in advance.

 

Hello,

 

How are you and your family doing? I hope you are doing great and this letter finds you all happy and in good health.


Sorry for not writing for so long this long lapse. This time but I have a good excuse!- I hadn't been at was not home for more than a month! All this while, my daugther and I and my daughter went to were staying in Sochi. to We were vacationing/holidaying at the Black Sea.


The holiday was Absolutely fabulous but ,unfortunately, so very costly too. I took a Though the bank loan from the bank to pay for our did help to defray the costs of the resort house accomodation and the train and the plane fares, now it's time time to work my tush off to repay the loan.  Still everthing was worthwhile.  By installments I am going to repay my debt to the bank.


First we went there by took the train. The train in which we travelled was new and was constructed built especially to for the Olympic Games; It was brand very new and very clean. The We returned trip was by plane.

 

Today, I went to work- it was my first working day from the trip/holiday/vacation. after my holiday. I had to cleaned two windows and mopped the floor from all the bubble gum! chews.


That's all for now. Please Take good care. Lots of love.

 

Your friend Ada.

August 25, 2014

Could you correct my writing, please? Thanks a lot in advance.

Hello,
How are you and your family doing? I hope you are doing great, and this letter finds you happy and in good health.
Sorry for not writing for so long, but I have a good excuse. I have been at away from home for more than a month.
My daughter and I went to Sochi, to on the Black sea.
The holiday was fabulous, but ,unfortunately, so very costly expensive. I took out a loan from the bank to pay for our resort house, and for the train and the plane tickets. By installments, I am going to repay my debt to the bank.
We went there by train. The train in which we travelled was new and was constructed specially to for the Olympic games. It was brand new and very clean. We returned by plane.
Today I went to work. It was my first working day after my holiday.  I cleaned bubble gum off of two windows and the floorfrom bubble chews.
That's all for now.
Please take good care.
Lots of love,
Your Friend Ada

September 5, 2014

   Hello, 

   How are you and your family doing? I hope you are doing great and this letter finds you happy and in good health. <em>I am</em> sorry for not writing<em> </em>for so long but I have a good excuse: I <em>have not</em> <em>been home</em> for <em>over</em> a month. My daughter and I went to Sochi <em>on</em> the Black <em>Sea.</em>
<em>   It</em> was fabulous, but <em>expensive</em>. I took a loan from the bank to pay for our resort house and for transportation. I am going to repay my debt to the bank <em>through an installment plan. </em>We went there by train. The train was new and was <em>built</em> <em>especially for</em> the <em>Olympic</em> Games. It was brand new and very clean. We returned <em>home</em> by plane. Today I<em> went</em> to work; my first <em>workday</em> after my holiday. I cleaned <em>bubblegum from</em> two <em>windows</em> and the floor.

   That's all for now. Please take good care, and lots of love,

 

   Ada

August 25, 2014

Could you correct my writing, please? Thanks a lot in advance.

Hello,
How are you and your family doing? I hope you are doing great and this letter finds you happy and in good health.
Sorry for not writing for so long but I have a good excuse- I haven't been at home for more than a month. I and My daughter and I went to Sochi to near the Black sea.
The holiday was fabulous but, unfortunately, so costly. I took a loan from the bank to pay for our resort holiday house and for the train and the plane. By installments I am going to repay my debt to the bank in instalments.
We went there by train. The train in which we travelled was new and was built constructed specially to for the Olympic Games. It was brand new and very clean. We returned by plane.
Today I went back to work- it was my first working day after my holiday. I cleaned two windows and the floor from bubble gum.chews.
That's all for now.
Please take good care.
Lots of love. 
Your friend Ada

August 25, 2014
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