Gigi
Tropical Cyclones The Philippines is the most-exposed large country in the world to tropical cyclones, and it has even affected settlement patterns in the northern islands; for example, the eastern coast of Luzon is very sparsely populated.
Aug 22, 2014 11:51 AM
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Tropical Cyclones

The Philippines is the most-exposed large country in the world to tropical cyclones, and  it  this  has  even  affected settlement patterns in the northern islands; for example, the eastern coast of Luzon is very sparsely populated.

 

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Your English is extremely good. Your spelling and grammar may be better than most native English speakers.  Well done!

 

My only comment is that your first sentence, while grammatically correct, is a little awkward.  

The Philippines is the most-exposed large country in the world to tropical cyclones.

The following is how a native English speaker would make the same statement:

The Phillippines is more exposed to tropical cyclones than any other large country.

 

I make this point only for the sake of interest.  Your original composition is extremely well written.

August 22, 2014
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