Holiday in Portugal

Hi people, the year for my Holiday i went in Portugal.
The Poutogal is a beatiful location, the sea is lovely but very cold.. my Holiday was very very good..if the only bad thing it has been my english....help me!!!

Here is a native speaker's version for you. Not bad. Keep practising. 

It is important to punctuate what you write.

A holiday in Portugal.

Hi everyone,

This year I went to Portugal for my holiday.

Portugal is beautiful. The sea is lovely but very cold. My holiday was very, very good.  The only difficult thing was that my English was poor.   Please help me! 

Thank you.

Some notes:

-  All countries, languages and natives of that country start with capital letters as the words are proper nouns: e.g. English - England, Portuguese - Portugal

- ' I ' is always a capital in English.

- Remember to put in articles in English: the sea; a holiday

Hope this helps. 

Holiday in Portugal

Hi people, the this year for my holiday I went in to Portugal.
The Poutogal Portugal is a beatiful place location, the sea is lovely but very cold.. My holiday was very very good.. if The only bad thing it has been was my English, please ....help me!!!