Ami
水来从水龙头 下大雨了结果水出来从水龙头。那么多好啊,我在路上走走看看干净的水出来从。我觉得因为这个水龙头的颜色是金色所以这个叫 sundhara (金水龙头)。 客人来这儿看看,喝,照片儿。
Aug 23, 2014 3:27 AM
Corrections · 2

龙头出水了

下大雨了结果故宫里从台基四边的龙头流出来出来从水龙头那么多多么好啊,我在路上走干净的水从龙头里流出来。我觉得想是因为这龙头的颜色是金色的,所以这个叫把它叫做 sundhara (金水龙头)。来这儿看,喝(?unclear,drink or exclaim?),照照相片儿。

August 24, 2014
@Ami - at this stage, to write about something so specific, it's better to include an English version so that we can help with your writing. I can kind of understand what you're writing, but there was an absence of coherence among these sentences.
August 23, 2014
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