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Spanish tourists We can see Spanish beaches which are full completlly. Not only people who live near to there but a lot of tourists from Spain or other countries. They want to enjoy the summer end having sunbaths and jumping the waves. However, we can find other tourists who have antisocial behaviors how nudit tourists on the Barceloneta street running around neighborhood. Imagine that you live there with your family and you must hear their parties. The Barceloneta neighbours are tired and want the councilior have solution. Down I write the news link: http://elpais.com/elpais/2014/08/21/inenglish/1408633977_166018.html
Aug 23, 2014 11:23 AM
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     <em>Our</em> Spanish beaches <em>are completely full,</em> not only <em>with "locals,"</em> but <em>also with many</em> tourists from Spain <em>and</em> other countries. They want to enjoy <em>the end of summer by sunbathing</em> and jumping <em>through </em>the <em>ocean</em> waves<em>, but</em> <em>we also have many tourists behaving </em>antisocially. <em>We have had to deal with</em> <em>naked</em> tourists <em>running around the neighborhood on</em> Barceloneta street. Imagine that you live there with your family and you <em>have to listen to their loud parties</em>. The Barceloneta <em>residents</em> are tired <em>of this </em>and want the councilior <em>to arrive at a</em> solution. 

  <em>   ¡Guau! Eso parece loco ;)  </em>

August 23, 2014

Good job! :).  I can understand your writing very well!

 

Spanish tourists

We can have seen our Spanish beaches which are fill up completely completlly. Not only do locals go, people who live near to there but a lot of tourists from Spain or and other countries go as well. They want to enjoy the end of thesummer end by sunbathinghaving sunbaths and jumping through/into/over(each word changes the meaning in a different way) the waves. Also/Furthermore/In addition/Moreover However, we have/see can find other tourists with who have antisocial/improper behaviors, like the how nudist tourists on the Barceloneta Street that/whorunning around theneighborhood. Imagine ifthat you lived there with your family and you had tomust deal with/listen to hear their parties. The Barceloneta neighbours are tired and want the councilior tohave asolution/ solve the problem.
Down I wrote/put the news link below:
http://elpais.com/elpais/2014/08/21/inenglish/1408633977_166018.html

August 24, 2014
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