My reflection.
Everybody have has a dream and I think that it is really important to believe in something in our life lives.
My dream is to become a doctor to help other people to stay better, maybe my dream could be considerate considered common, but it isn't for to me.
When I will finish my study studies in Italy I would like to go in to Germany to work, because the political system in Italy isn't good and everything becomes difficult [Userei "is" invece di "becomes"... suona meglio secondo me]. I don't want to live in a country where the citizens are neglected.
But first of all I want to improve my English to comunicate with other people.
So I ask you to correct my topic to help me :) Volentieri! :)
Scrivi molto bene! Fa attenzione ai piccoli errori (per esempio, si scrive sempre la preposizione "to" con i verbi all'infinito in inglese)
Bravissima, dottoressa! In bocca al lupo! ;)
<em> All of us</em> have <em>dreams,</em> and <em>it is</em> important <em>to have goals for</em> our <em>lives. </em>My dream is become a doctor. I <em>want to help others maintain their health.</em> <em>Some may consider</em> my dream <em>to</em> be <em>a</em> common <em>one</em>, but it isn't <em>common to</em> me. When I finish my <em>studies</em> in Italy<em> I would like to work in Germany</em>, because the political system in Italy isn't <em>well</em> and everything <em>has </em>become difficult. I don't want live in a country <em>that neglects its citizenry, however</em> I want to improve my <em>English</em> <em>so that I may</em> comunicate with <em>more </em>people.