A New Challenge In the beginning of this year I made a decision that changed my life. I decided to quit my job, leave the city that I was living, and move to another country to have new experiences. F

Amanda

A New Challenge In the beginning of this year I made a decision that changed my life. I decided to quit my job, leave the city that I was living, and move to another country to have new experiences. First, I was in doubts about what I would like to do and where I would like to live. But, after a long conversation with one friend that, at the time was moving to London to study English, I decided do the same. I had been saving money for some years, and I realized that would be possible to live in London for 6 months studying only. So, 3 months after, I moved to London and I've been living here for 3 months. I'm so grateful about that, because I'm thinking about many things in my life, what a really want to do, etc. Next month I'm moving to the countryside to have a new experience in an organic farm. I'm excited, because everything will be new: friends, place, working! Let's wait and see what will happen!

Aug 27, 2014 7:54 PM

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A New Challenge

In At the beginning of this year I made a decision that changed my life. I decided to quit my job, leave the city that I was living in, and move to another country to have new experiences. First, I was in doubt s about what I would like to do and where I would like to live. But, after a long conversation with one a friend that, at the time was moving to London to study English, (so) I decided to do the same. I had been saving money for some years, and I realized that it would be possible to live in London for 6 six months, just studying only. So, 3 three months later after, I moved to London and I've been living here for 3 months. I'm so grateful for about that because I'm thinking about many things in my life; what a I really want to do, etc. Next month I'm moving to the countryside to have a new experience in an organic farm. I'm excited because everything will be new: friends, place (location), working! Let's wait and see what will happens! (The present tense sounds more natural here)

Most of the corrections are quite minor. This is good English.

'At' is used for specific times and places. It is more specific than 'in'.

Numbers one to ten are usually written in full.

The expression is 'in doubt'. I had doubts or I was in doubt.

September 2, 2014

At the beginning of the year I made a decision that changed my life. I decided to quit my job and move to another country for new experiences. First, I was in doubt as to what to do and where to live, but after a long conversation with one friend, who at the time was moving to London to study English, I decided do the same.

I had been saving money for years, and I realized that it would be possible to live in London for six months of study. Three months later I moved to London and I've been here for three months now. I'm so glad I did this, because I'm thinking about my quality of life, and what I really want to do. Next month I'm moving to the countryside to have a new experience at an Organic Farm. I'm excited because everything will be new -- friends; area; job. Let's see what happens.