Can someone please correct this short proposal?
In my opinion, you are setting up a very interesting series of documentaries which ?would be of interest to? (depends what you actually mean by the word 'affect') a large number of people of all ages. Please find below my suggestions for four unusual hobbies.
TANGO DANCING
It could be a strange hobby for a man, but this is the point. I have been dancing since I was ten years old. Tango is an incredible (maybe 'incredibly;' - 'incredibly' means that the passion is incredible; 'incredible' means that the dance itself is incredible - either would work - you choose) passionate and intense dance that let people show their deepest feeling. On the other hand it takes huge effort: after ten years of practice I cannot consider myself a good dancer yet.
COLLECT FOSSIL
I collect fossils from (either 'all ages' or 'any age' and from all over the world (you wrote 'word'). I have got around a hundred fossils bought directly from the extraction site or from the internet.
MUSHROOM GROWING
A friend of mine has this incredible attitude (I think that 'attitude' may not bring the correct meaning - do you mean system or way of growing in which case say 'way of') growing mushrooms. He owns some 'yards' is a linear measurement, you need square yards or acres OR hectares - find the definitions - of woodland in which he plants any species of mushroom that can properly survive in those particular weather conditions.
PHOTOGRAPH
Maybe it does not sound as strange as the other, but I am thinking about quantity: one of my friends has twenty thousand photographs collected during his whole life.
These suggestions will be of interest to a large group of people and without any doubt they are the strangest hobbies that you will ever hear.
Many thanks to all of you who will take a few minutes to correct this writing. Bye
<em>You</em> are setting up <em>an</em> interesting series of documentaries which can affect a large number of people of all ages. Please find my suggestions about four unusual hobbies <em>below.</em>
TANGO DANCING
It could be a strange <em>hobby</em> for a man, but <em>that</em> is the point. I have been dancing since I was ten years old. <em>The </em>Tango is an <em>incredibly</em> passionate and intense dance that <em>lets</em> people show <em>their</em> deepest <em>feelings</em>. On the other hand it takes <em>much</em> effort <em>to master. A</em>fter ten years of practice I cannot consider myself a good dancer yet.
COLLECT FOSSIL
I collect <em>fossils</em> from any age and from all over the word. I <em>have collected almost</em> a hundred <em>fossils </em>bought directly from<em> their</em> extraction site or from the <em>Internet</em>.
MUSHROOM GROWING
A friend of mine has this incredible attitude <em>towards</em> growing mushrooms. He owns <em>fields in the</em> woods <em>where</em> he plants <em>the species</em> of <em>mushrooms</em> that <em>thrive</em> in <em>the</em> particular weather conditions <em>there.</em>
<em>PHOTOGRAPHY </em>
<em>It</em> does not sound as strange as the<em> others,</em> but <em>in terms of</em> quantity; one of my friends has <em>saved </em>twenty thousand photographs <em>that have been </em><em>taken</em> during his life.
These suggestions will be of interest to <em>many</em> people, and without <em>a</em> doubt<em>;</em> they are the strangest hobbies that you will ever hear <em>of</em>.