The perfect city I am just 16 now, but in the future I would love to move to England. I've always loved the English style and I think people there are really lovely! I've been to London twice and I fe

Valentina

The perfect city I am just 16 now, but in the future I would love to move to England. I've always loved the English style and I think people there are really lovely! I've been to London twice and I fell in love with it. But since it's a very busy city, I was thinking about Brighton. I've never been there but through videos and pictures I've seen there are a lot of cool things there. There is the sea, so you can easily go for a walk if you want to relax listening to the waves sound. There are lots of cute little shops full of interesting things, clothing, beauty and home wise. There are malls and there is also the cultural side of the city, which is always nice to see. I can't wait to go there as soon as I can so I can check if it's actually as beautiful as people describe it.

Aug 28, 2014 2:24 PM

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The perfect city

I am just 16 now, but in the future I would love to move to England. I've always loved the English style and I think people there are really lovely! I've been to London twice and I fell in love with it. But since it's a very busy city, I'm thinking about Brighton. I've never been there, but through videos and pictures ,I've seen there are a lot of cool things there. There is the sea, so you can easily go for a walk if you want to relax listening to the sound of the waves. There are lots of cute little shops full of interesting things, clothing, beauty products and homeware. There are malls, and there is also the cultural side of the city, which is always nice to see. I can't wait to go there as soon as I can so I can check if it's actually as beautiful as people describe it.

This is a really good essay, Valentina. There aren't really any mistakes at all - I've just made a couple of changes as you can see. I live in Brighton, and it really does have everything. It's close to London, but it has the sea, the countryside, culture, shopping, a lively nightlife and a great student 'vibe'.

August 28, 2014

The Perfect City

I am just 16 now, but in the future, I would love to move to England. I've always loved the English lifestyle and I think the people there are really lovely! I've been to London twice and I fell in love with it, but since it's a very busy city, I've been considering going to Brighton instead. I've never been there, however, I've seen there are a lot of cool things there through videos and pictures. There is the sea, so you can easily go for a walk if you want to relax listening to the sound of waves. There are lots of cute little shops full of interesting things, clothing, beauty and home-made stuff. There are malls and there is also the cultural side of the city, which is always nice to see. I can't wait to go there as soon as I can, so I'll be able to check if it's actually as beautiful as people describe it. :)