Jeffrey
Blog 1 Actually I don't know where to start. But anyway I decide to keep a dairy every now and then from now on to move on my English learning progress. I know this would help. I didn’t wake up until 11 o’clock, having had several sorrowful dreams. These days were really confusing to me. Woke up playing DOTA2, having meals and then went to sleep, nothing else. A plenty of plans had been delayed due to my laziness. However, I did notice what I was been doing, and truly knew that this was wrong. And still, not willing to make any change. When a thing reaches its extreme, it reverses its course. Tonight I finished my Ad. file which was planned two weeks ago. Cheer up! There are lots of hard works waiting for me to challenge.
Aug 28, 2014 3:12 PM
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Blog 1

Actually I don't know where to start. But anyway I decide to keep a dairy every now and then from now on to move on my English learning progress. I know this would help.
I didn’t wake up until 11 o’clock, having had several sorrowful sad dreams. These days were are really confusing to me -  wake up playing DOTA2, having meals eat and then went go back to sleep. That's it and nothing else. A plenty of Many plans had been are being delayed due to my laziness. However, I did noticed what I was been doing, and truly know that this was is wrong. And Still, not unwilling to make any change.


When a something reaches its extreme, it reverses its course. Tonight I finished my Ad. file which was planned two weeks ago. Cheer up! There are lots Plenty of hard works difficult tasks awaiting for me to be challenged.

 

You have the natural flow of thought and grammar. Your activity has become a daily habit and therefore a "fact".  Hence has to be in present tense.

August 28, 2014
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