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1st of September 1st of September is the Day of Knowledge in Russia. It means that all pupil return to their respective schools after their holidays? Many people name this day, the gala day, but when I was a child, I didn't think so. Perhaps, this day is the gala day for adults, but for pupils it wasn't as they had to be in school and couldn't meet up in the city or on the internet. I became a teacher this summer. This 1st of September is a significant day for me. However, I am not feeling happy because I am a little worried. My new school is known to be a school for troubled teens. It's just not the teen factor but it is also called the night school and has number 13 on it. It's symbolical, isn't it? I really think that it will be an interesting and unusual experience. Something like Jazz.
Aug 30, 2014 4:30 AM
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<em>     The first</em> of September is the "Day of Knowledge" in Russia. It means that all <em>pupils</em> return to their respective schools after their holidays. Many people name this day the <em>"Gala Day,"</em> but when I was a child I didn't <em>think that name was appropriate</em>. Perhaps, this day is the <em>"Gala Day"</em> for <em>parents</em>, but for pupils it wasn't, as they had to be in school and couldn't <em>meet-up</em> in the city or on the internet.

     I became a teacher this summer. This <em>first</em> of September is a significant day for <em>me, however</em> I am not feeling happy because I <em>am worried</em>. My new school is known <em>as</em> a school for troubled teens. It's just not the teen factor, but it is also called <em>"The Night School"</em> and has <em>the </em>number 13 on it. It's <em>symbolic,</em> isn't it? <em>This</em> will be an interesting and unusual experience — something like Jazz. 

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August 30, 2014
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