Valentina
Thank you! I like writing here and I want to say "Thank you" to everybody who corrects me and comments my notes :) It is very intersting to read. I look forward to each comment But I have one small request. If you read my note leave the massage, please! like you it or not? how does it sound? may be it will be better to say about it in another way? Because in Rusaian there are so many various synonyms and various contexts that sometimes i cannot express my emotions in english. So I ask you to "сomplicate" my stories. If you understood my emotion in the note, may be you was in the same situation, so write please how would you write about it :)
Aug 30, 2014 12:16 PM
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     I like writing here and I <em>would like to thank everyone</em> who <em>has provided corrections</em> and comments. <em>Your feedback has been</em> <em>interesting</em><em>, and </em><em>appreciated, but</em> I have one request<em>:</em> <em>please leave comments addressing if</em> you <em>liked </em>it or not<em>; and why. Did it read well? Would there be a better way to write it?</em> 

     <em>I ask this, because </em>in <em>Russian</em> there <em>are many</em> <em>synonyms and contexts, and</em> <em>I often</em> cannot <em>properly </em>express <em>myself</em> in<em> English. Please</em> "сomplicate" my stories <em>for me</em>. If you <em>understand the</em> emotion <em>of</em> the note, <em>it may be because you have experienced</em> the same situation, so please <em>suggest </em>how <em>you </em>would write it. 

     <em>Your request proves your insight and wisdom. Consider reviewing: vocabulary; use of the past-tenses; and excessive use of adverbs. To gain the understanding of the moods of the written word is the key to self-expression. You are well on your way, Valentina. </em>

August 30, 2014
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Thank you!

I like writing here and I want to say "Thank you" to everybody who corrects me and comments on my notes :) It is very intersting to read. I look forward to each comment. 
But I have one small request. If you read my notes, please leave a message, whether you like  it or not. How does it sound? Maybe it is better to say about it in another way? 

Because in I'm a native speaker of Russaian there are I can use so many various  a big variety of  synonyms and various contexts which sometimes I don't know in English and therefore I can not express my emotions fully in English.
So, I ask you to "сomplicate" my stories. If you understood my emotion understand what I mean in this note, maybe you have been in the same situation, so write please let me know how would which way you would write about it :)

August 30, 2014

Thank you!

I like writing here and I want to say "Thank you" to everybody who corrects me and comments on my notes :) It is The comments are very interesting to read, and I look forward to each comment them.
But I have one small request. If you read my note leave the massage, please! Tell me whether you like you it or not? How does it sound? maybe it will be better to say about it in another way?
Because in Russian there are so many various synonyms and various contexts that sometimes i cannot express my emotions thoughts in English.
So I ask you to "сomplicate" my stories. If you understood my emotion in the note, maybe you was have been in the same situation, so in such a case, write please describe it in your own words how would you write about it :) <em>(the day is not so long!)</em>

August 30, 2014
charlescuy, yes!
August 30, 2014
It sounds like you want your notes to be bigger, better and more comprehensive.
August 30, 2014
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