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Something Worth Remembering

Maybe 15 days ago, I tried to write a passage on this website, waiting for someone to correct it. I knew it may not attract anyone's attention, however, surprisingly I found I was wrong, since I found that some native speaker corrected it.  It made me very happy.  So I come here again and write it down.  I love this website and this little article page.

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Please do not worry that I made so many corrections.  Your meaning was very clear.  Most of my corrections related to "tense" (past, present, or future).  Because you are writing about a past experience, you must use the past tense of words.  ("Found" rather than "find", "knew" rather than "know", and so on.)

Something worth memorizing remembering

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Remember to have spaces after commas and full stops:)

A good try:)