My Brother´s Birthday Today is My Brother´s Birthday. We was in a countryside with his friends and family and i had a fantastic idea coocking a chocolate cake for them. The cake was delicious but th

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My Brother´s Birthday Today is My Brother´s Birthday. We was in a countryside with his friends and family and i had a fantastic idea coocking a chocolate cake for them. The cake was delicious but the people now are not good. They are constantly going to bathroom. So much people are ill i and starting to think that maybe the problem was chocolate. It was the first time that i cooked a cake and i was really happy but i am depressed. This website is terrific to express my thoughts and also you can correct to me. At least i learnt something of english. Regards everybody.

Aug 30, 2014 7:03 PM

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My Brother´s Birthday

Today is my brother´s birthday.
We were in the countryside with his friends and family and I had a fantastic idea to cook a chocolate cake for them. The cake was delicious but now the people are not good. They're constantly going to bathroom. So many people are ill that I started to think maybe the problem was the chocolate cake.
It was the first time that I had cooked a cake and I was really happy but now I am depressed.
This website is terrific to express my thoughts and also you can correct me. At least I've learnt something of english.
Regards everybody.