Well "The book of Disasters and Mistakes" Hahaha
When iTalki asked me: "Write something..", my face was like.. ok, I'll wrong mistake all grammar but I'm more strong stronger than it, so I want to try. xD
I can talk about my city, so... my city is Naples, Campania. It is really a beautiful city, a typical South place, there are: the sea, sunshine for a lot of time (in the) during summer, coasts. And I know a lot of you think about : "But I heard that Italians have great food there, or I was wrong?" Yes, exactly. :D We can say that here we invented the PIZZA, and here it is so tastes and so good. *-*
That's all. Hahahaha ... I dont want to write more because I know I did made so much many mistakes, but I'm here for to learn.
<em>Okay, it was quite a good text for an introduction. Yes, you made mistakes, but it's alright, you're here to learn. :)
So, I'm going to explain further what I corrected:
1. Always, always, the pronoun "I" is written in capital letter (lettera maiuscola), no matter where it is placed in the sentence.
2. "wrong" is an adjective, not a verb. But, for the sake of your context, there is a verb "to mistake" which could be used, but I am not very sure if it is entirely correct (as I'm not a native speaker), that is why I colored it in blue.
3. Simple Past Tense for regular verbs: Infinitive + ed
Example: I waited, he asked, we invented (so don't forget that)
4. "sunshine for a lot of time</em> <em>(in the) during summer" - I suggested to use "during", since it sounds better, but "in the" is not incorrect, that's why I put it in brackets.
Also, "a lot of" is a way of expressing quantity, while "for a lot of time"/"for a long time" expresses duration
5. "Much" is used for uncountable nouns: How much water did you drink? We don't have much time left. How much money do you have?
"Many" is used for countable nouns: How many dogs did you see? Were there many chairs at the table?
Well, I hope this helps you. Feel free to ask me anything else you might want to know. :)
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