PLS DO CORRECTION FOR ME, THANK YOU SO MUCH！ The pie charts describe date on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2005. It can be seen from the first two pie ch

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PLS DO CORRECTION FOR ME, THANK YOU SO MUCH！ The pie charts describe date on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2005. It can be seen from the first two pie charts that the ages of the population in Yemen are divided into 3 main sections. The ages between 0 to 14 years accounted the greatest proportion (50.10%) of whole population in 2000. This figure is predicted to fall to 37.0% in 2050. The ages between 15 to 59 years constituted 46.3% of population in 2000, increasing to 57.3% which become the largest proportion in 2050. The ages above 60 years represent the least proportion both in 2000 and 2050, 3.6% and 5.7% respectively. According to the last pie charts that the population in Italy is occupied the most by the ages between 15 to 59 years in 2000 and 2050 (61.6% and 46.2%). The ages above 60 years constituted 24.1% and 42.3% of population in 2000 and 2050. Overall, Italy has bigger proportion of senior citizens and lesser children among population compare to Yemen.

Aug 31, 2014 10:50 AM

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These pie charts show the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000, and projections for 2050.

It can be seen from the first two pie charts that the ages of the population in Yemen are divided into 3 main groups. Those aged between 0 and 14 years accounted for the greatest proportion (50.10%) of the total population in 2000. This figure is predicted to fall to 37.0% by 2050. Those aged between 15 and 59 years constituted 46.3% of the population in 2000, increasing to 57.3% by 2050, and are therefore projected to become the largest proportion of the population by 2050. Those above 60 years old represent the smallest proportion both in 2000 and 2050, 3.6% and 5.7% respectively.

According to the latter pie charts, the population in Italy will be mostly between 15 and 59 years old in both 2000 and 2050 (61.6% and 46.2%, respectively.) Those above 60 will constitute 24.1% and 42.3% of the population in both 2000 and 2050 respectively.

Overall, Italy has a bigger proportion of senior citizens and less children than Yemen.

**Notes: Though I've made many corrections, they're all small grammatical changes; your English is really good! Keep up the good work!**

August 31, 2014

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