It has been a long time <em>since I've written</em> on this page<em>, but</em> here I am with my cup of coffee; inspired to practice. I <em>used to work</em> hard <em>on</em> my <em>English</em>, but now I <em>feel</em> lazy because it's summer and <em>we should</em> enjoy summer, <em>shouldn't we</em>?

     Today <em>I laid on</em> the beach and <em>recorded myself speaking in English</em>. <em>I listened to it afterwards.</em> It didn't make me feel better <em>about</em> my <em>English,</em> because I have <em>forgotten</em> many <em>words</em> that I am sure <em>I knew </em>before. I should look for <em>English speakers</em> nearby and <em>talk with them often. </em> 

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I'm going to write a little bit today.
It has been a long time since I have written without writing anything on this page, but now.Here I have am with my cup of coffee, and I am inspired to practice practise.
I worked very hard on with my English in the past  then, but now I've m grown lazy. I think it's because  of  it's summer and everyone has to enjoy summer, don't they them?

Today lied on the beach, and I tried to record  my voice myself to listen to it afterwards. It didn't make me feel better about  with my english because I have forgoten many words that I should have known am sure before I know.

What I should do is look for English people nearby, and practice speaking  English with them almost everyday for a while in english.


Thanks

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yellow= capitalize that letter
crossingout= not needed/ there's a better way of saying it
blue = what I put instead
green= I moved it/switched places

I hope this helps and if you have any questions regarding my corrections please just ask~!