일기#5: Ice Bucket Challenge에 참여하기 

이틀 전에 "Ice Bucket Challenge"에 참여했어요.

( 했어요. is fine but is more close to " I did Ice Bucket callange ", 참여했어요. I took part in..would be better in this conditon )

제 친구가 저를 지 지난주에 Ice Bucket 참여하는 것을 지명했는데 바로 하지 못 했어요. (원래는(originally) 지명 후에 24시간내에(within, 까지 by )  하기로 되어 있어요.)

Two days ago I did the "Ice Bucket Challenge." My fiend nominated me to do it two weeks ago but I couldn't do it right away. (You're supposed to do it within 24 hours after being nominated.)

언어 교환 친구와 그녀의 친구랑 집에서 근처에 있는 작은 공원에 양동이(Buket in Korean) 하고 얼음을 가져왔어요. 제 강아지도 갔어요. 제 머리 위에 직접 부었을 때 몹시추웠어요! 또한, 언어 교환 친구가 너무 천천히 부어서 더 불편했어요.  (아주, 몹시 buth meanings are very, quite but 아주 mostly  use in postive situration. 아주 맛있어요. It is very delicious.  몸시 use in nagative sitruation) ( I understand you want to say.. Also 또,, but when you put in front of the sentence.. 또한 is correct ) 

My language exchange partner and her friend and I took a bucket and some ice to a small park near my house. My dog went, too. When the water was poured right on my head it was really cold! Also, my language exchange partner poured really slowly so it was even more unpleasant.

ALS.org에 돈을 아직 기부 안 했는데 기부 하려고 해요. 자선 기부 하는 것이 Ice Bucket의 목적이에요.

I haven't donated to ALS.org yet but I plan to. Donating to charity is the purpose of the Ice Bucket.