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谢谢你们 Thank You Last time I wrote the short article ‘My Dream’, but it did surprise me when I saw that there are some foreign friends who is so kind and helpful did correction for me. Especially Mr Dawei, thank you very much and your correction is detailed, which let me know many mistakes of mine that is small but important. Your correction is useful and precious for me. I hope that I could have more communications with foreign friends in the aspect of language learning in the future. We can help each other and make progress together! Thank you!Y(^_^)Y 上一次我写了《我的梦想》这篇小文章,我没想到会有外国的如此友善而乐于助人的朋友给我修改。尤其是大卫先生,非常感谢您,您的修改非常细致,让我看到了我英语中的很多细小但很重要的漏洞,这对我非常有用而且十分珍贵。希望以后我能和外国友人有更多语言学习方面的交流,我们彼此互帮互助,共同进步!谢谢!Y(^_^)Y
Sep 1, 2014 10:11 AM
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谢谢你们

Thank You


Last time when I wrote the short article "My Dream", but it did I was surprised me when I saw to see that there are some foreign kind overseas friends who is so kind and helpful did made corrections to my essay for me. I, especially have to thank Mr. Dawei, thank you very much and your for his corrections is are detailed. which let me know Even though the many mistakes seemed minor  of mine that is small but nevertheless important to me. Your correctionare very is useful and precious important to for me. I hope that in future, I could have more such corrections. communications with foreign friends in the aspect of language learning in the future. We can help each other and make progress together! Thank you!Y(^_^)Y
上一次我写了《我的梦想》这篇小文章,我没想到会有外国的如此友善而乐于助人的朋友给我修改。尤其是大卫先生,非常感谢您,您的修改非常细致,让我看到了我英语中的很多细小但很重要的漏洞,这对我非常有用而且十分珍贵。希望以后我能和外国友人有更多语言学习方面的交流,我们彼此互帮互助,共同进步!谢谢!Y(^_^)Y

 

在中文裡,这种文章尾語可用, 但在英文中, 听起来非常不誠實, 太俗了. 好像說, "他非常出名..." 如果真是出名的, 大家就知道, 不必这样說, 明顯是不出名啊.

September 2, 2014
不用谢,应该的
September 1, 2014
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