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Could you correct my short post? Many thanks in advance for your help. How are thing going on there? what is the weather like? Here it is rainy and a bit cold. Today we had a holiday- we celebrated the first of September which is considered the day of Knowledge. From this day a new school starts. The performance was amazing and children were dresses so nicely- white bands on there hair , white shirt and dark bottom. I was showered with lovely bunches of flowers. But one advantage is that I had to wash up all plates Twice. First before laying the table and last after laying the table As I am the only person is the staff who is not a form master (mistress) I had to lay the table wash plates I got so tired but it was great to have a party . It is raining again and the rain is pitter-pattering against the windows. I like this sound. Take good care Sincerely, Lada
Sep 1, 2014 7:48 PM
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Could you correct my short post? Many thanks in advance for your help.

 

How are things going on there? What's is the weather like? It's Here it is rainy and a bit rather cold.
Today, we had a holiday- we celebrated celebrating the first of September. which is considered It's the Day of Knowledge for us for it is the day when the new school term starts.
From this day a new school starts.


The performance What performance?  You should give a short introduction, otherwise those not in the know are confused.  was amazing and The children looked so amazingly pretty as they were dressed so nicely with white bands on there hair, , white shirts and dark pantsbottom.


I was showered with lovely bunches of flowers.

 

But one disadvantage One problem is that I had to wash up all dinnerware plates twice. First Once before they are set on laying the table and last after laying the table  again after the meal.  As I am the only person is the staff who is not a form master or mistress, not only do I have to lay set the table but all the cleaning and washing as well. wash plates


I got was so tired but it the party was great. to have a party .  

 

It is raining again and I like the sound of the the rain is pitter-pattering of the rain against the windows. I like this sound.


Take good care.

Sincerely,
Lada

September 3, 2014
I'm not sure what table wash plates are? If you are trying to say 'the plates you have washed', you should say.... 'the washed plates'. Table is not usually used as a prefix to plates. You may be thinking of something else though. Also not sure if its an advantage to wash them? I changed it to disadvantage because you had a 'but' at the beginning of your sentence. Hope this helps :)
September 1, 2014

Could you correct my short post? Many thanks in advance for your help.

How are thing going on there? what is the weather like?
Here it is rainy and a bit cold.
Today we had a holiday- we celebrated the first of September which is considered the day of Knowledge.
From this day a new school starts.
The performance was amazing and children were dresses so nicely- white bands on there hair , white shirt and dark bottom.
I was showered with lovely bunches of flowers.
But one advantage is that I had to wash up all plates twice. First before laying the table and last after laying the table
As I am the only person is the staff who is not a form master (mistress) I had to lay the table wash plates
I got so tired but it was great to have a party .
It is raining again and the rain is pitter-pattering against the windows. I like this sound.
Take good care
Sincerely,
Lada

September 1, 2014

Could you correct my short post? Many thanks in advance for your help.

How are things going there? What is the weather like?
Here it is rainy and a bit cold.
Today we had a holiday where we celebrated the first of September which is considered the day of Knowledge. 

On this day a new school term starts.
The performance was amazing and all the children were dressed so nicely, white bands in their hair, white shirt and dark bottom.
I was showered with lovely bunches of flowers.
But one disadvantage is that I had to wash up all the plates Twice. First, before laying the table and secondly, after laying the table.
As I am the only person of the staff who is not a form master (mistress), I had to lay the table wash plates.
I got so tired, but it was great to have a party .
It is raining again and the rain is pitter-pattering against the windows. I like this sound.
Take good care
Sincerely,
Lada

September 1, 2014
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