Sarah
A Late Assigment-A Touching Story I saw an excellent video named "Validation" that my English teacher shared with me last Tuesday. I should have to submit homework as soon as possible, but unfortunately, I went to Kaifeng on business a few days ago and I went back last night. As a result, I have to hand in my homework today. Ok let's get back on track. In this micro film we can see two main characters who are Hugh and Victoria. Hugh is a handsome man who gives both free parking and compliments to his customer. Hugh just likes to see people smile and he often makes them surprise, excited and confident by his sincere compliments. Victoria is a pretty beautiful girl who is a photographer at the Department for Motor Vehicles. Hugh went to the DMV for a driver license photo one day and he was attracted by Victoria at first sight. He smiled at her but he was warned that “No smiling, smirking humor or general gaiety permitted” again and again. In order to make Victoria smile, Hugh bought her beautiful flowers, toys and gave compliments. Surprisingly, she didn’t smile as usual . Hugh was very sad and he didn’t give compliments any longer. He became so depressed and he was fired finally. Hugh was invited to take a photo of a couple when he hung out. He was suddenly enlightened when he complimented them and they smiled happily. He began to compliment people around him include a woman in a wheelchair. Hugh was very surprise when he saw a man’s smile photo on his driver license. He went to the DMV immediately but he was told that Victoria had been fired. He looked for Victoria anywhere and he found her taking passport photos happily at last. Hugh knew Victoria last smiled when she was a little girl. And she haven’t smiled since her mother got very sick. They hugged and kissed each other in the end. This is a very touching story which is full of positive energy. We should not only smile but also give compliments. I think if everyone can do like Hugh, the world will be filled with love and happy.
Sep 2, 2014 6:15 AM
Corrections · 2
nice :)
September 2, 2014
I'm sorry I've found some mistakes such as "surprised" and "happiness". I should be more carefull next time.
September 2, 2014
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