How is your day?

Hey,everyone. I'm here again. Let me ask you a small question. How is your day? Do you want to know about mine. I just have been through a hard day. I'm a twelfth grade student. I think all of the people who have studied in twelfth grade might know that this is the hardest year. Everyday you have to study very hard and keep your mind alert all the time. Even if you are not interested in some subjects, you still have to study them and grin and bear it. Because if you don't get over your disinterest in those subjects you might fail the important test in a year. The college you have longed for won't admit you. It's such a  cruel system. So the only thing you can do is study hard. Hmmmmmm, so how was your day?

Excellent work with very few mistakes. Remember to leave a space after the full stop - '.' - at the end of every sentence and before the first word of the next sentence.  I see from your posts that you are a very diligent and enthusiastic student.  You deserve to go to the college of your dreams, but even if you don't its not the end of the world. There are always alternatives. Don't worry, be happy ! ;).  Just do the best you can.