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Internet Nowadays, the e-commerce is growing very quickly. Each day more and more people decide to buy their new mp3, TV, cameras, flights, etc through internet. Sometimes I ask myself if the big supermarkets will have future as we know actually. The older people continue buying in these shops but in the future I think these businesses will have a drop in their sells because of the competence of the e-commerce. From my point of view, in the future buying through internet will be even safer and easier than it’s now. The changes are happening slowly but I think Internet is changing all ours ways of life, now you can access immediately to a lot of information and learn from your house without go to the library, learn things that before very few people could had teach you. Also people are more confidents about travelling to other faraway countries because they can read lots of opinions and actual information of other travelers. Of course Internet has many cons and pros but I think it’s an extraordinary educational tool, in special for the most needed countries where they don’t have universities, appropriate teachers, schools… but the problem is that there is much population without internet access yet.
Sep 2, 2014 4:28 PM
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Nowadays, the e-commerce is growing very quickly. Each day more and more people decide to buy their new mp3s, TVs, cameras, flights, etc. online. through internet. Sometimes I ask myself if the big stores supermarkets {supermarkets sell food} will have a future as we know actually. The Older people continue to buying {should specify what, like buy products, things, goods...} in these shops, but in the future I think these businesses will have a drop in their sells sales because of the strength competence of the e-commerce. From my point of view, in the future buying online shopping through internet will be even safer and easier in the future than it is now.

The changes are happening slowly, but I think the Internet {internet (lowercase) is more common now} is changing all ours ways of life,. Now you can immediately access immediately to a lot of information and learn {something} from your house without going to the library. You can learn things that before very few people could had teach have taught you. Also, people are more confidents about travelling to other faraway countries because they can read lots of opinions and actual information of from other travelers.

Of course, the internet Internet has many cons and pros and cons, {for some reason, we always say pros and cons, not the other way around} but I think it’s an extraordinary educational tool, in special especially in the most needed underprivledged countries {You could also say "in the poorest countries." Underprivledged is a political correct term that we use frequently to describe towns, communities, countries etc. that don't have a lot of resources} where they don’t have universities, appropriate teachers, and schools. but The problem is that there is much population are a lot of people who still don't have without internet access yet.

September 2, 2014
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