lynne
the love! do you belive the love forever?i don't belive ! because i have seen a lot of facts! a lot of people before didnt get what you are good to you,but when they get everything changed! they will not be good for you, suddenly disappeared! how can i belive the love?
Sep 3, 2014 3:42 AM
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The love!

Do you belive believe  the love is forever?   I don't belive believe because i have seen a lot of facts . 

a lot of people before didnt get what you are good to you,but when they get everything changed! they will not be good for you, suddenly disappeared! how can i belive the love?

Have another think about your sentence above , try again ,  

 Example

 A lot of people dont see how good you are to them in life , and the other person changes also and  disappear's out of your life  . So how can i believe that love is forever . 

Good effort -  Ian / English teacher / China

September 3, 2014
yes you are totally right, Iynne...anyway me neither...!^^
September 16, 2014

Love!

Do you believe in everlasting love? I don't, because I have seen the truth!

 

A lot of people don't see how good you are to them. Then they change and then disappear from your life. So how can I believe that love is forever?

 

How can I believe in love?

September 12, 2014

the love!

do you believe  love forever? i don't believe ! because i have seen a lot of facts!

A lot of people dont see how good you are to them in life , and the other person changes also and disappear's out of your life . So how can i believe that love is forever .

 how can i believe the love?

September 3, 2014
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