One week with my kids. One week with my kids. Passed so fast that I am a little confused with the began this week. I need to schedule my classes on italki and to start to reading the articles in engl

Humberto

One week with my kids. One week with my kids. Passed so fast that I am a little confused with the began this week. I need to schedule my classes on italki and to start to reading the articles in english to practice and keep what I ever learned. Other preoccupation and doesn't less important, is the lost lessons of my daughter during this week, we talked with the teachers about this period but now we have to do a compensation to these days. We traveled to the beach, my father have a house there, we stayed six days with sun, we enjoyed a lot it. Every day we went to one different place, other cities how to Santos, there we went to know the Municipal Aquarium, my little girls loves the sharks, penguins and the turtles, after the visit we went to a restaurant and eating a fish with sauce of prawn, we finish the day with one visit in two museums, the first went the fishing, second the maritime museum, there are a lot things about shipwrecks and ships industries, very cool. In the way of house I decided to pass through the Port, this part of city isn't beautiful, the place is dirty and ugly, many buildings abandoned and streets without informations to guide you. So, that didn't difference because I backed to the town and I took the road to my house. Were great days, no rules to wake up and to sleep, eat and to leave, we laughed a lot with the kids imitating artists and creating characters imaginary.

Sep 8, 2014 11:43 PM

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One week with my kids.

The week passed so fast that I am a little confused with the began beginning of this week. I need to schedule my classes on italki and to start to reading the articles in English to practice and keep what I ever have learned.

Another Other preoccupation, and doesn't which is not less important, is the lost lessons of my daughter during this week. We talked with the teachers about this period but now we have to do a compensation to for these days.

We traveled to the beach. My father have a house there. We stayed six days with in the sun. We enjoyed a lot it.

Every day we went to one different place. One of these places was other cities how to Santos. There we went to know the Municipal Aquarium. My little girls loves the sharks, penguins and the turtles. After the visit we went to a restaurant and eating a fish with sauce of prawn sauce, we finished the day with one visit in two museums. The first went the focused on fishing. The second was the maritime museum. There are were a lot things about shipwrecks and ships industries. It was very cool.

In On the way of house home, I decided to pass through the Port. This part of the city isn't beautiful. The place is dirty and ugly. There are many buildings abandoned buildings and streets without informations to guide you.

So, that didn't difference because I backed to the town (I'm not sure what you mean here)

and I took the road to my house.

These were great days with no rules about when to wake up and to sleep, to eat and to leave. We laughed a lot with the kids while imitating artists and creating characters imaginary characters.

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Great job, Humberto! It sounds like you had a wonderful vacation!

A couple of reminders:

English is very picky about what makes a sentence, and we use periods very frequently! I fixed these in your writing, but I didn't mark each one in blue.

Usually, we put the adjective in front of the noun.

Make sure you have a subject (noun and pronoun) for your verbs.

Also, double check your verbs to be sure you are using the correct tenses. There were a few times when you used present tense, but the story is about the past.

Overall, you did a good job. I'm glad you got to enjoy your time with your family. :)

September 9, 2014

One week with my kids. (A week with my kids)

It passed so fast that I am a little confused with the began start of this week. I need to schedule my classes on italki and to start to reading the articles in English to practice and keep whatever I learn.
Another preoccupation - and doesn't no less important - is the lost lessons of my daughter during this week. We talked with the teachers about this period but now we have to do a compensation to make up for these days.
We traveled to the beach; my father has a house there. We stayed (for) six sunny days. with sun and we enjoyed it a lot it.
Every day we went to one a different place, other cities how to Santos, (Significado não está claro) There we went to see know the Municipal Aquarium. My little girls loved the sharks, penguins and the turtles. After the visit we went to a restaurant and eating had a fish with prawn sauce. of prawn, We finished the day with one a visit to in two museums: the first was the fishing, the second the Maritime museum. There were are a lot things about shipwrecks and ship s industries; very cool.
On the way home, of house I decided to pass through the Port. This part of city isn't (so) beautiful; the place is dirty and ugly with many buildings abandoned and streets without information s to guide you.
So, that didn't difference because (No faz sentido) I backed returned to the town and I took the road to my house. (I returned to town and took the road home.)
They were great days; no rules when to wake up and to sleep, eat and to leave. We laughed a lot with the kids imitating artists and creating characters imaginary. (Significado no está claro).