cynthia
STARS My grandma said,"every star represents a person,each person would become a star." when i was a child,i always tried to count stars,despites my grandma forbade me to do that.However, i would give up at last. For there were so many stars in the sky that i couldn't remember which star i had counted. There has been raining a few days.The raining makes me depressed.Maybe there are the tears, the stars' tears,which brings people's miss.
Sep 15, 2014 9:46 AM
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STARS

My grandma said says,"every star represents a person,each person would will become a star."
when i I was a child,i I always tried to count stars,despites my grandma forbade forbidding me to from doing that.However, i I would give up at last. For there were so many stars in the sky that i I couldn't remember which stars i I had counted.
There has been raining for the last a few days.The raining makes me depressed.Maybe there are the tears, the stars' tears,which brings people's peoples' miss mess.

September 15, 2014
Twinkle twinkle little star
September 15, 2014
nice
September 15, 2014
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