Until last week, I rested because it was holiday time in Korea.
I made a lot of foods because my relatives came to my home.
It was quiet hard, but I ate delicious foods and met my cousins.
It was a pretty good time for me. I rested a lot so, (I gained energy - <em>sounds strange in this context</em>. I felt recharged - <em>is better</em>). Unfortunately I gained my weight too.
On Last Saturday, my friend got married. I was surprised when I listened heard about her marriage.
I had thought I am not that old, but I felt we are not young anymore.
She was one of the first friends I made.
She was awesome, and I thought getting married when I am younger is better than when I'm older.
Wedding dresses fit better on young brides.
However, I don't have a boyfriend so it is just a dream. I am so sad.
Very well written! I hope these corrections are helpful.