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Please correct my sentences.(3) 1 - I have been accepted to come here today, Why don't you want to let me in ? 2 - I want to add one more condition in my contract, Am I allowed to do that? 3 - I really admire your courage, but you need to be careful from being reckless. 4 - Don't ask me to admit, I said many times, I wasn't here in this time. 5 - I know that I made a big mistake, but do you think that it's better to advice me more that keep blaming me? Please correct my sentences, or let me know if there is better suggestion to express any meaning in these lines. But please distinguish between the correction and the better suggestion. Thanks.
Sep 16, 2014 11:55 AM
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Please correct my sentences.(3)

1 - I have been invited to come here today, Why won't you want to let me in ?

2 - I would like to add one more condition in my contract.  Am I allowed to do that?

3 - I really admire your courage, but you need to be careful about being reckless.

4 - Don't ask me to admit guilt, I have said many times, I wasn't here at that time.

5 - I know that I made a big mistake, but don't you think that it's better to give me advise than to keep blaming me?

Please correct my sentences,
or let me know if there is better suggestion to express any meaning in these lines.
But please distinguish between the correction and the better suggestion.

Thanks.

September 16, 2014
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Please correct my sentences.(3)

1 - I have been accepted to come was invited to be here today. Why don't you want to aren't I being let me in? ?

2 - I want to add one more condition into my contract. Am I allowed to do this that?

3 - I really admire your courage, but you need to be careful from about being reckless.

4 - Don't ask me again. to admit, I have/had said many times before that I wasn't here in this during that time. Logic error in using "this time".  Right now you are HERE talking.  So this means that you are lying!

5 - I know that I made a big mistake, but don't you think that it's better to advice me more that than to keep on blaming me?

Please correct my sentences, or let me know if there is to show me a better suggestion to express any their meanings in these lines.  


But Please distinguish can you indicate the distinction between the a correction and the better suggestion.

Thanks.

 

Read are corrections, Blue are better alternatives.

September 16, 2014
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