Find Beauty Around Us

Do you agree that there isn't we don't see [1] beauty in places that we are familiar with? In general, people don't think the environment in which they live is beautiful, nor do they cherish the friends around them. As a result, people have a strong desire to travel to other places, which are also ordinary for those who are familiar with them, hoping to discover beauty and relax themselves. Moreover, people always envy others--[2]other people seem to live such a happy life. In fact, however, [3] others may also envy your life. As far as I am concerned, it is not that there isn't beauty in places that we are familiar with, but a lack of ability to discover the beauty around us.

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[1] The grammar of your original sentence was correct.  However, I have suggested a change which better conveys your meaning.

[2] Because your English is so good, I will introduce an "em dash" which normally looks like this: —.  However, because this can't be typed easily, it is often replaced by two hyphens: --.  It is important to use two hyphens here, because a single hyphen carries a different meaning.

[3] Here, 'in fact' and 'however' both mean the same thing, so you need only one phrase.

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This is a very well-written composition.  Well done.

Also, I agree with you. I once adopted the habit of carrying a camera with me, to force me to notice the beauty in my own surroundings.