My first entry.
Hello everybody,
This is my first entry in this web page. I hope that it is written properly. However, if you find any error [more severe to me] mistake, please advise me so that I won't repeat in order do not replicate it later. [replicate implies repetition with a purpose]
If somebody [too slangy, "someone" is better] you are interested in is studying Spanish I can help! might support him in order to improve their knowledge of this language. [too formal and cold sounding, doesn't show sincerity]
My first entry.
Hello everybody,
This is my first entry in this web page. I hope that it is written properly, if you find any errors please advise me in order so I do not replicate it them later.
If somebody is studying spanish I might support help him in order to improve their knowladge of this language.