Fatih
First time is coming !!! Hi you all, This is a first time of my turn to try to write in english i public. I'm such a girl who interested in comunicated in english so much, but it's hard for me to take a chance also. I'm surrounded by people who not speak English. Actually, I just speak it out for english, however It's hard to do this in my society. People started taking note me and finding mistakes out .Afterward, they all judge me as a pretending-show-off girl. Ew. It was boring so bad. somebody of you all might wonder why just started speaking English would become a Show-off, because in my society, a major of people can not speak English that why people have a stereotype like this for any one speak english. lastly, I would love so much if anyboby can correct my english above then correct them to be sound native english writting not as like this :) Thank you you all :)
Sep 18, 2014 3:05 AM
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First time is coming !!!

Hi everyone. This is a first time of my turn to try to write in English I public. I'm such a girl who interested in communication in English so much, but it's hard for me to take a chance also. I'm surrounded by people who don't speak English. Actually I just speak it out for English, however it's hard to do this in my society. People started taking me notes and finding mistakes out. Afterward they all judge me as a pretending-show-off girl. Ew. It was boring. Somebody of you all might wonder why just started speaking English would become a Show-off, because in my society most people can not speak English. That's why people have a stereotype like this for anyone speaking English.
Lastly I would be grateful so much if anybody could correct my English above then correct it to be sound native English writting not as like this :)


Thank you you all :)

September 18, 2014
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