Jocelyn
0917 Journal~ Haha~ I am writing yesterday Journal. Yesterday was fairly tough. I stayed up all night and I just took a nap 3hours. I think it was success for my mission. Yesterday, I slept earlier than the otherday. for this reason, I didn't wirte my journal, but that's ok! In dawn, I studid a lot. It was delayed works actually, but I was proud of my self. I done whole my delayed works. After taking a nap, I went to a shopping mall with my sister. We browesed the mall and my sister give me a present to me. She bought clothes for me. It was a late gift but I was happy to accept that!
Sep 18, 2014 7:12 AM
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0917 Journal~

Haha~

I am writing yesterday's journal.

Yesterday was fairly tough. I stayed up all night and I just took a nap for just 3_hours.

I think it was success for my mission was successful.

Yesterday, I slept earlier than the otherday.  

(the other day = a day earlier in the week, other days = earlier that usual)

For this reason, I didn't write my journal, but that's ok!

At dawn, I studied a lot. It was delayed works Actually, it was work that had been delayed, but I was proud of myself.

I done whole my delayed works.  
I caught up with all my work.  /  I completed all the work that had been delayed 

After taking a nap, I went to a shopping mall with my sister.

We browsed the mall and my sister gave me a present /  gave a present to me. She bought clothes for me.

It was a late gift but I was happy to accept it!


Well done, Jocelyn.  Your journal was interesting and easy to understand. 

September 18, 2014
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