Tomomi
Waiting line I went to the shopping mall. I found there would be a concert at the shopping mall, because people was waiting line. The concert is for free because of publicity activities. I saw people was waiting line at 11am, so I throught the concert would begin soon. But I checked the time starting the concert, the concert would start 6pm. So people would wait more than 6 hours to see the concert ! I wanted to see the concert because singer who I like would come. But I can't wait more than 6 hours, after all I didn't see the concert.
Sep 18, 2014 1:23 PM
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Waiting line

I went to the shopping mall (today, yesterday, the other day?).

I found out that there was going to be a concert at the shopping mall, because people were waiting in line. (Did you ask the people waiting in line, or did you read a sign or something?)
The concert was free because of publicity activities. (この文は日本語で何といいますか)

I saw people were waiting in line at 11am, so I thought the concert would begin soon.
But I checked the starting time of the concert, and it was 6pm.
So these people were going to(or 'willing to') wait more than 6 hours (just) to see the concert ! 


I wanted to see the concert because singer who I like would be there.
But I can't wait more than 6 hours, so in the end I didn't see the concert.

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Yeah, I would not want to wait more than 6 hours for a concert either. Unless it was someone I really really liked! ^^;

September 18, 2014
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