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Could you correct my short post? Many thanks in advance for your help . How are thing going there? Hos is the weather? Here it is warm and sunny. I have just returned from work. As usual hungry as a wolf and tired as a donkey. My legs are weary and my eyes are blurred. so sorry for typos. I am going to eat now. My mum cooked aubergines with tomatoes and fried potatoes. Unfortunately, potatoes are a bit overfried. I am still struggling with my depression and I try not to reproach myself with the fact that there is also my guilt in breaking up my marriage. Yesterday I phoned to my estraged husband. He didn't answer phone but when he answered he was so rude. He is so callous and cruel. I cant do anything. I make myself do something. Ok, I must have dinner my meal was heated Take care and good luck Yous, N
Sep 18, 2014 2:28 PM
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Could you correct my short post? Many thanks in advance for your help .

 

How are things going there? Hows is the weather? Here it is warm and sunny.
I have just returned from work. As usual, I am as hungry as a wolf and tired as a donkey. (In America, we usually wouldn't use these expressions.  We might say something like "I'm so hungry, I could eat an elephant" and "I'm dog tired.") 
My legs are wearyweak and my eyes are blurred,. so sorry for typos.
I am going to eat now. My mum cooked aubergines (in America, this would be called an eggplant) with tomatoes and fried potatoes. Unfortunately, the potatoes are a bit overfried.
I am still struggling with my depression and I try not to reproach myself with the fact that there is also my guilt in breaking up my marriage.
Yesterday I phoned tocalled my estranged (maybe ex-husband?) husband. He didn't answer the phone right away, but when he answered did, he was so rude. He is so callous and cruel.
I can't do anything. I make myself do something.
Ok, I must have dinner. mMy meal was heated
Take care and good luck
Yours, N

September 18, 2014

Could you correct my short post? Many thanks in advance for your help .

How are thing going there? Hos How is the weather? Here it is warm and sunny.
I have just returned from work. As usual, I am hungry as a wolf and tired as a donkey.
My legs are weary and my eyes are blurred., so sorry for any typos.
I am going to eat now. My mum cooked aubergines [1] with tomatoes and fried potatoes. Unfortunately, the potatoes are a bit overfried over-cooked.
I am still struggling with my depression and yet I try not to reproach myself with the fact that there is also my guilt in breaking up my marriage.
Yesterday I phoned to my estraged estranged husband. He didn't answer the phone (at first?) but when he answered he was so rude. He is so callous and cruel.
I cant can't do anything. I must make myself do something.
Ok Okay, I must have dinner my meal was heated while it is still hot.
Take care and good luck.
Yous Yours, N

 

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[1] Good heavens, I had to look up the word 'aubergine'.  I believe Americans and Australians know this as an 'eggplant'.

September 18, 2014

How are things going there? What is the weather? Here, it is warm and sunny. 

I have just returned from work. As usual, hungry as a wolf and tired as a donkey.
My legs are weary and my eyes are blurred. so I am sorry for some typos.
I am going to eat now. My mum cooked aubergines with tomatoes and fried potatoes. Unfortunately, potatoes are a bit overfried.
I am still struggling with my depression and I am trying not to reproach myself with the fact that there is also the feeling of guilt in suing my marriage.
Yesterday I phoned to my stranger husband. He didn't answer the phone but when he answered he was so rude. He is so callous and cruel.
I cant do anything. I told myself to do something.
Ok, I should eat my dinner. My meal was heated .
Take care and good luck

September 18, 2014
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