Kenji Sugimura
I hope they feel the Earth early. I have two children. One is a girl and the other is a boy. The girl is 7 years old. And the boy is 5. They are learning English at school too. They had a friend who came from Canada, but his family moved. I hope they can make friends who are from other countries. In my college day, a girl who is from Indonesia was in at the college. But I had never talk to her for four years because I'm shy. I am very regretful yet. Of course my friends who are from Japan are important too. But I think if I talked to her , I could feel the world is more near. The reason why I want to speak English may be that there was such my experience. I hope they feel the Earth early. Thank you for reading.
Sep 19, 2014 5:04 AM
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But I think if I had talked to her , I could feel the world more near, the experience would have brought me closer to the outside world.<em> </em>
The reason why I want to speak English may be that there was such my experience, is to connect to the world.

I hope they feel the Earth can feel that connection early. 


Thank you for reading.

September 20, 2014

I hope they feel the Earth early.

I have two children, a girl and a boy.

One is a girl and the other is a boy.  <em>{Grammar is correct but not the most natural phrasing}</em>
The girl is 7 years old. And the boy is 5. <em> {Grammar is correct but not the most natural phrasing}</em>

My daughter is 7 and my son in 5.

They are learning English at school too.
They had a friend who came from Canada, but his family moved.
I hope they can make friends more friends who are from other countries.

In During my college days, I had a classmate girl who is from Indonesia. was in at the college.
But I had never talked to her for four years because I'm shy.
I am still very regretful yet.

Of course my Japanese friends who are from Japan are important too.

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<em>{I'm Sorry I don't fully understand what you are trying to say below.....日本語でお願いします....}</em>


But I think if I talked to her , I could feel the world is more near.
The reason why I want to speak English may be that there was such my experience.

I hope they feel the Earth early.

Thank you for reading.

September 19, 2014
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