John
Chinese People In China, there are a large group of people who was born and grew up in the countryside but is living and working in the cities. They are not registered permanent residence of cities because their parents or grandparents are not. Generally speaking, they are poor-educated due to the low quality of education in China’s rural areas. The jobs they usually take are those that city dwellers are not willing to do, including construction work and factory assemble line. Of course, a few of citizens are well-educated enough to get descent jobs, but they prefer staying at home. Of course, unlike their countryside counterparts, they can apply unemployment relief from the government and most time they rent their houses for an extra income. The reason why people in the countryside emigrate from places where they were born is that there is barely no infrastructure at home in most remote areas. Take my hometown as an example, the primary school there only has one teach building that was built more than two decades ago and came in use when I was in primary school. At the same time, there are no other educational facilities, such as a playground, library, and labs. The situation is worse than it was during my childhood. In fact, there are only less than 10 old teachers and hundreds of students. None of the teachers knows English and teach the kids in our local dialect. During my days, the sky was clear and creeps were full of fish, but all these have gone forever. Tourists who just stay in big cities may think that China is first country in the modern world. But it is not true. Cities may be flourishing in some ways, and the government and officials are becoming richer and richer. Most people in China are not so.
Sep 19, 2014 8:03 AM
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Chinese People

In China, there are a large group of people who were born and grew up in the countryside but are now living and working in the cities. They are not registered permanent residence of cities because their parents or grandparents also are not. Generally speaking, they are poor-educated due to the low quality of education in China’s rural areas. The jobs that they usually take are those that city dwellers are not willing to do, including construction work and factory assemble lines. Of course, a few of citizens are well-educated enough to get decent jobs, but they prefer staying at home. Of course, unlike their countryside counterparts, they can apply unemployment relief from the government and most time they rent their houses for an extra income.
The reason why people in the countryside emigrate from places where they were born is that there is barely no infrastructure at home in most remote areas. Take my hometown as an example, the primary school there only was one building that was built more than two decades ago and came in use when I was in primary school. At the same time, there are no other educational facilities, such as a playground, library, and labs. The situation is worse than it was during my childhood. In fact, there are only less than 10 teachers and hundreds of students. None of the teachers know English and they teach the kids in their local dialect. During my days, the sky was clear and creeks were full of fish, but all these have gone forever.
Tourists who just stay in big cities may think that China is first world country in the modern world , but it is not true. Cities may be flourishing in some ways, and the government and officials are becoming richer and richer. Most people in China are not. 

 

I just got back from China and I totally saw what you wrote! The local dialects are causing people not to be able to talk to each other and right now your country is industrializing so many people just care about money. Simple mistakes but make sure you just watch your verb tense otherwise you're great! Remember people means more than one so: people are 

zaijian 

September 19, 2014
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