Heather716
a nice day 2 Today i've met my German friend again,at frist we decised go to the zoo,but big rain day,so we changed,we are eat luch toghter and watched a moive.frist i really a little angry about Deji plaze's cenima,it have bad internet and no wifit.A most proplar place not have these importamt things.No internet then i can't buy tickets online,online buy ticket we called it tuan gou(Chinese),u can get 50% or maybe more discount.So we changed an other one. After watch moive we eat traditional nanjing foods,and he told me for europen they only order what they want,not like Chinese book a big one share toghter,so when i share what i order he feel very shy.And when he asked normally who will pay,i told him i accpect AA,but better i pay this one and he pay next one.thats more Chinese way.After dinner we desiced go to zoo next week
Sep 19, 2014 1:23 PM
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我觉得他还不错,每个人都有自己的闪光点,你的头发比他的头发帅
November 30, 2014
他帅哥吗?
November 30, 2014
Nice story about cultural differences. I hope you will exchange more differences with your friend and learn a lot from each other! :)
September 21, 2014
By the way, most westerners do not know that 'AA' means to split the bill.
September 19, 2014

a nice day 2

Today I've met my German friend again At first we decised go to the zoo, but it was raining a lot ,so we changed our plans. We ate lunch together and watched a movie. At first, I was really a little angry about Deji plaze's cenima, because it has bad internet and no wifi. A popular place like this should have these importamt things. If there is no internet then I can't buy tickets online.  We call buying a ticket online buy ticket we called it tuan gou(Chinese).  Online, you can get 50% or maybe more discount or more, so we changed another one.
After watching the movie we ate traditional nanjing foods, and my friend told me in Europe they only order what they want, not like Chinese, who order a big one share together, so when I shared what I ordered, he feel very shy. And when he asked normally who will pay, I told him I accept AA, but it would be better if I pay this one and he pays the next one. Thats the more Chinese way. After dinner we decided go to the zoo next week.

 

[Your basic story flow is good.  Remember to put a space after all periods and commas; also, remember that the pronoun 'I' is always capitalized.]

September 19, 2014
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