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If you possible, correct my mistakes. thank you so much. Says Another Man Hi Valentine. How are you? What's up? A man who is 40 years old. He got married when he was 32 years old. His wife is 27 years old. And they have 2 sons who are 6 and 7 years old. It is interesting that he tells " it is the best that every one get marry with the first love. I asked him why do you say it! He told because when I was 25 years old I felt in love. My love and me had being in relationship together around 2 years. I wanted to get marry with her, but my parents did not take serious my willness and they told me you are so young and you need not get marry now. He told I was not rich man that time so I was not able to do it. I asked him if you get back in that time what you will do! He answered me I will get marry with her. because I always think about her from that time till now. I told him, oh my god! I am sorry for it! But I think you will keep these thinks and May be you with thinks allow to yourself that you have fun without your wife! What do you think? Thank you for your correction.
Sep 19, 2014 2:26 PM
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Hi Valentine.
How are you?
What's up? 

I know a man who is 40 years old. He got married when he was 32 years old. His wife is 27 years old. And they have 2 sons who are 6 and 7 years old. It is interesting that he tells me, "It is the best that everyone get married with their first love."

I asked him, why do you say it! He told me "because when I was 25 years old I fell in love. My love and I had been in relationship together around 2 years. I wanted to get marry with her, but my parents did not take my willness seriously and they told me you are so young and you do not need to get married now."

He told me "I was not a rich man at that time so I was not able to do it." I asked him, "if you went back in that time what would you will do!" He answered me, "I would get marry with her because I always think about her from that time until now."

I told him, "oh my god! I am sorry for it! But I think you will keep these thinks and May be you with thinks allow to yourself that you have fun without your wife! (I don't understand the meaning of this sentence)

What do you think?
Thank you for your correction.

October 10, 2014
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