Frank
about friends i konw konws a new friend is so eazy, but if you wanna to make a real friend and take a long time friendship, you will felt is so hard. so, i know some friends is not good to for you and for something to close to you. And once you make happen something is so bad, some gays never help you take the hand. is so hit my heart. so if make good friend, you will must heart to heart and konw each other for the deepply!! thanks for you help, friends
Sep 21, 2014 4:18 PM
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About friend

I know making a new friend is so easy, but if you want to make a real friend and make a long-term friendship, you will feel it is very hard. so, I know some friends are not good to for you and for something to be close to you. Also, once you do something bad, some guys never give you a hand. So it has hit my heart. So if you make a good friend, you will must communicate heart to heart and know each other for the deeply!!

Thanks for your help, friends

 

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September 21, 2014
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